Goal: Use connectives to join sentences (because, but, and, however)
Hemi’s dad was so cranky that he told Hemi's to mow the the lawns.
“It has to be done in the weekend. Otherwise you won't get any pocket money” “fine.”
But Hemi would rather be making inventions in his shed: “hang on a minute” Hemi said to himself. Could I make a robot that wide mow the lown then I will never have to do the lawn again.
At night Hemi went into his shed and found 4 steak knives, a laser pointer, a copter, sizises, dads hair trimmer and 3 guitar strings to tie them all together. Bong Clank thomp Hemi stad up all night making his mystery mishen. In the morning he dragged it on to the lawn and took the shit off. Then he took his remote control out of his pocket and tipped in mower Send. Suddenly the robot akerveted and started to mow the lawn. Ha this is the life soon he fall asleep but he was Easily woken by a crowd's yelling “stop that robot” Hemi ran down the street as fast as he could. As fast as he could and people started to throw money at him and now he is the richis pepison in the would.
I like that you put in lots of describing words. Like that you put in lots of full stops in the right places. I just no-test that your first sentence didn't make scene.
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